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Listen to the pitter patter of the rain,
Feel the rain drop kissing your cheeks,
As you step on the pavement awash with mud;
Witness the rain curtains announcing the play,
And observe the breathtaking canvas of our nature.

Look at the man with his white umbrella,
Listen to him humming softly in his bulky blue boots;
As he dances his tale to the universe,
The thunder rumbles for him,
And lightning flicks the camera for him.

Observe the children splashing in the puddles,
And notice the rain caressing their heart;
As the rain drop trickles down their rosy cheeks,
The breeze brushes their fears away,
And the trees sway to applaud their laughter.

Doze off on the wet grass after the summer rain,
And sniff the refreshing scent of damp nature;
Listen to the birds tweet and the frogs croak,
And the orchestra of the crickets under the trickling leaf;
Gaze at the clouds wandering in the blue sky,
And smile at the summer sun hiding behind the clouds.

(G.L)
-Rain
I illustrate the beauty of the rain in my eyes; a thought I had a while back when the sky was pouring rain.  
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shep4life Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Witness the rain curtains announcing the play,
And observe the breathtaking canvas of our nature.

As he dances his tale to the universe,
The thunder rumbles for him,
And lightning flicks the camera for him.

The breeze brushes their fears away,
And the trees sway to applaud their laughter.

Wonderful lines!
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awhh, you're so so sweet! Thank you so so much. :manhug:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime! Truly lovely
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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Maliceah Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
I love the thespian reference to the rain curtains announcing the play.  Nice work there!
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe.. Thank you! Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Sho lovely) [V2] 
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yanshik Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
i can imagine this as an ending poem of a beautiful movie. such strong imagery! makes me miss the rain.
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, that's a lovely compliment you gave me. Thank you so much! Neko Emoji-27 (Being kawaii) [V2] 
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yanshik Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
my pleasure. :) 
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ArcNovaXIII Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is not only magically, it is a lovely way to show rain and mystic love of cloudy skies.
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