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                                   I want to sit on the
                        roof top in your boxers and kiss
                 you while listening to you telling me about
              the stars that made the constellations on my
           face. I want to kiss you when you photograph me,  
         because that's what I want to remember: loving you    
        endlessly and boundlessly. I want to kiss you when you
       are too tired and too drunk, and watch you slobbering all
       over me, while I laugh in your breath on my lips. I want to
       kiss you in libraries, when you'll blush and tell me to stop
      but we'll                              end up                         making
        out                               anyway.                         I want
        to kiss                        you until                        your lips
        feel sore                 and        they                     burn
         with my           scent.              I want            to kiss
          you when you are                  leaving, when there's  
            maelstrom in your tears and blizzard wind in your
                          trembling voice. I want to kiss
                          you like there's no tomorrow,
                          I want to feel your pulse  on
                          my  lips and rip your lips so
                          that   they  bleed  and  hurt.


(G.L)
Addicted to Messy Kisses
I'm still trying out with visuals, please tell me if I'm doing anything wrong. :ashamed:

I made it skull because that's what happens you need to quit an addiction all of a sudden. And in this case, his kisses.

I can't make it center and I'm not sure if it will be visible in tablets and phones though. Really Sad 
I put it as free verse because dA won't allow me to put it as visual.

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Thank you so much for browsing, feel free to leave comments (that would be nice), and have a lovely day! :huggle:
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:iconpradyrk:
Pradyrk Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that is one dangerous kiss and i surely would love to have it ^_^
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha! Thank you! A flower for my love 
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:iconcrystal-magic13:
Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa. Nice!
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! Thank you so much! :heart:
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brownmontana Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love it Wink/Razz 
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:iconchamjari:
Chamjari Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014   Artist
I think it's cool. Adds a different dimension to the poem. The skull shape darkens the young love feel.
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :rose:
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:iconburning-question:
Burning-Question Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Girl, if you have "constelations on your face" it probably means you need good dermatologist. XDDD Sorry I had to. But anyway I really like it and the idea with the skull- very interesting. ^^
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I was trying to illustrate a girl with freckles. :eager:

Anyway,  thank you! :la:
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SociallyAwkwardDino Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You. Are. Just. Brilliant. 
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwh, thank you!! :huggle:
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TomFA Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I feel really identified with this, that kind of passion. Nicely wrote, and the visual totally makes sense with the description.
Last line kinda shocked me though.
Hope she doesn't see this, she's on DA too...

And for center and things, did you try using the HTML codes?

I guess this will help. scarlettedeath.deviantart.com/…

Bye, and best wishes for you!
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :heart: And awh, I hope you two are happy together, you sounded cute with her. :love:

Thank you for the site, it definitely help! Thank you thank you thank you! :huggle:
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TomFA Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
You're welcome, thanks!
(I'm scared this will end on an endless cycle of thanks-you're welcome-thanks-you're welcome...)
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahahahaha, last one I promise. :eager:

You're welcome! :tighthug:
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greenemerald200 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Super awesome....I seriously love this too much >_=

Well, I'm pretty much alone now and this poem did an awesome job in returning me to my fantasies and....who knows....maybe one day it might happen ^_^


best of luck to you darling ^_^ and KEEP ON WRITING!
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It will happen sweetie!  :huggle:

And thank you so much!! :rose:
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SteffenC-itsjustme Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This made me miss being kissed with the kind of passion that only comes with a love of complete devotion and infatuation. It makes me sigh thinking about it, but also smile because I have that to look forward to, when I find someone worth creating that kind of love with again.

Great poem and a good visual :) Kudos ^^
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gosh thank you! I'm so glad it made you smile.  :hug:
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SteffenC-itsjustme Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
'twas my pleasure :huggle:
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TheWeeLad Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
Milk-and-Pie you have done it again, capturing my attention and arresting my emotions with simple words simply said.
marvelous!
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Weeee, thank you Mr. TheWeeLad. :heart:

:tighthug: :tighthug:
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thomasVanDijk Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There's ways to put this up as a monospace font, so each letter and space has the same width. All you need to do is wrap the entire text in <code> tags.

<code>
Like 
   this.
See?

</code>
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ooooooh, ok ok, thank you for teaching me, I appreciate it a lot. I'll definitely try it out next time! :heart:
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Cevelr Featured By Owner Edited Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Oooooo *keeps this in memory* very useful *W* Thank you for sharing your knowledge!
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Daemonet Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student General Artist
It looks fine on my iPad c: this is so clever!
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Omg yay! And thank you so much! :huggle:
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Daemonet Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student General Artist
You're welcome! I really love the poem too c:
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ;A;
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WrittenInRaw Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
It gets more intense as it goes on... More anger building up. Well written.
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :la:

:manhug:
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punkrockmop Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student General Artist
This is fantastic!
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you sweetie! :hug:
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punkrockmop Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem!
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WindbrushTLK Featured By Owner Edited Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
To make it a visual, you might could open whatever drawing program you use and type or handwrite it as such and them save as a picture file? Along with being able to tag it as a visual on dA, you can be sure it will look the way you want it to, and you could even add a background if you so desire! Writing it out by hand would also add some personality to it as well. :nod:

Anyway, great work on this! I like it. :D
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aaah okay. I'll try it then, thank you so so much on the advice and the compliment! :heart: 

:tighthug:
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Manic-Xenophobe Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Excellent contrast between the poems subject and visual presentation. 
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :eager:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOVELY DEAR! Now I want to try visual poetry...
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you dearie! :huggle: It's really fun though, you should totally try it. :rose:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I need to!!
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Then I look forward to it!!! :dummy:
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blalock27 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
+fav  +fav  +fav 
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: :heart: :heart:
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Wow! Great visual! Don't worry Senpai! You did just fine! I love the concept. A violent love like that one seems rather addicting if you write it like that.
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay, thank you so much! :love: 
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
You're very welcome Senpai!
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Maddiesque Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
All your poetry is still so perf girl :) xxx
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, dearie. :heart:
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