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                                   I want to sit on the
                        roof top in your boxers and kiss
                 you while listening to you telling me about
              the stars that made the constellations on my
           face. I want to kiss you when you photograph me,  
         because that's what I want to remember: loving you    
        endlessly and boundlessly. I want to kiss you when you
       are too tired and too drunk, and watch you slobbering all
       over me, while I laugh in your breath on my lips. I want to
       kiss you in libraries, when you'll blush and tell me to stop
      but we'll                              end up                         making
        out                               anyway.                         I want
        to kiss                        you until                        your lips
        feel sore                 and        they                     burn
         with my           scent.              I want            to kiss
          you when you are                  leaving, when there's  
            maelstrom in your tears and blizzard wind in your
                          trembling voice. I want to kiss
                          you like there's no tomorrow,
                          I want to feel your pulse  on
                          my  lips and rip your lips so
                          that   they  bleed  and  hurt.


(G.L)
Addicted to Messy Kisses
I'm still trying out with visuals, please tell me if I'm doing anything wrong. :ashamed:

I made it skull because that's what happens you need to quit an addiction all of a sudden. And in this case, his kisses.

I can't make it center and I'm not sure if it will be visible in tablets and phones though. Really Sad 
I put it as free verse because dA won't allow me to put it as visual.

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Thank you so much for browsing, feel free to leave comments (that would be nice), and have a lovely day! :huggle:
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Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa. Nice!
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! Thank you so much! :heart:
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brownmontana Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
love it Wink/Razz 
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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Chamjari Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
I think it's cool. Adds a different dimension to the poem. The skull shape darkens the young love feel.
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :rose:
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Burning-Question Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Girl, if you have "constelations on your face" it probably means you need good dermatologist. XDDD Sorry I had to. But anyway I really like it and the idea with the skull- very interesting. ^^
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I was trying to illustrate a girl with freckles. :eager:

Anyway,  thank you! :la:
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SociallyAwkwardDino Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You. Are. Just. Brilliant. 
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:iconmilk-and-pie:
Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwh, thank you!! :huggle:
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