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Bomb detonated,
Slashes and tears are my garment;
I'm leaving crippled foot prints,
Savaging the corpse with my sadistic relinquishment.

I give up, I surrender,
Dignity is my thrust of departion;
Desperation no longer earn endearment,
I'll crouch in a corner reminiscing every triumph we had.

Ah, fragments of euphoria is ruling me,
As the masochism in me strikes;
I'm losing it, I'm dancing hysteria,
I'm ecstatic as long as I'm alive.

(G.L)
Abused
I illustrate an abused individual finding bliss in drugs.
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your words are so sharp, in the very best way. 
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot! Sweet feedback like yours means a lot to me. :tighthug:
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BleedingProphecies Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, I'm glad to hear it! 
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:bounce: 
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AtrociousLamb Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional Artist
Exactly how it manifests...Beautiful rendition. Bad memories.
Love it. Thank you :huggle:
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :love:
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
Huggle! Huggle! Huggle! 
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:manhug: :manhug: :manhug:
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LydiaBv Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Iīm just writing a story and I didnīt know how to continue, but  this helped me out a lot...thanks
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha! Then, umm.. Welcome! (And thanks too) Good luck with your story! :squee:
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prelude2before Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional Artist
Really like it. It was if I could feel the chaos build into the contorted nightmare. Being a recovering addict, it really pulls buried memories through the floodgates of my mind. Very well done. 
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! You just made my day go better with this comment. And keep up your good job, good luck too. :tighthug:
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AtrociousLamb Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Professional Artist
Deep; beautifully written. I love your wording and the direction it takes after the first paragraph. :love: :huggle:
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! That's very sweet of you. :huggle:
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soulmary Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
I love the imagery and the tension you create.
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Milk-and-Pie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I really appreciate kind feedbacks like yours. :manhug:
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